when did u leave ?

the wrenching away

of your hand

the

pushing away

from my embrace, the

scream that rose from deep within

the

ugliness of words

desperate

for conviction, the

slamming of the door

an illusion

of permanence

your image through the window

like a shadow

a half self

the other half

breathing

throbbing

living

loving

inside

my heart

when did you

ever leave ?

7 Responses to “when did u leave ?”

  1. vishal says:

    beauty.
    obsession with a loved one, when the loved one has moved on and one is just pretending to..
    what is the meaning of friendship in this context. does one cleanly break or does one show one’s magnanimity by an acceptance of what is in one’s loved one’s life and ones’s own. do i love her so much that i shouldn’t disturb her at all or do i observe my obsession without any judgement.

  2. meghna says:

    raw pain and intense love. This poem talks about the delusions a sane being allows himself to slip into sometimes…heartbreaks cause suffering like nothing else.

  3. Subodh Deshpande says:

    nice poem, this is a common dilemma..that you see two sides of self..cause simple..duality exists..
    duality exists becuase we try to judge ‘our own self’ with the tools that can not judge infinity. This is why we see a lot of loopholes, shortcommings in sagun forms (sagun forms – all various incarnations) so far, eventhough these loopholes do not exists at all. Many of the intellectuals(half baked, learned fools) had said to overlook these otherwise you are doing blasphemy, where as the real intellectuals (a true bhakta, saints) also says to overlook these because these real intellectuals sees a trap of maya in it (it means these loopholes, shortcommings etc).
    And due this ‘Chao’ of all intellectuals, others are forced to go away from ‘our own self’ – this is power of maya.

    thanks..subodh

  4. pravesh kumar says:

    i have no time to read my email bcoz i am busy in my dreams
    b’t you interested in me little bit then contact me at +919813852919
    i am very sorry
    but nor my choice we came here
    neither we have opportunity to leave this world
    then why thy born us becoz we all have a heart to feel the peace
    which no other living being can feel
    the love of togetherness hug
    beyond lust or any need we share what we have
    that is love
    before i die i want to see the world is happy
    and when i leave it continuously increases increases
    this is my dream

  5. tanz says:

    you never left
    still i wept
    illusions remain
    memories
    to pain
    words
    hurt
    dreams haunt
    your disappearance
    wish
    costed me ONLY tears

  6. Geetha says:

    Very nice but a sad poem!

  7. Surabhi says:

    Pranaam Shekhar ji

    A desire to be with !! A wonderful expressiveness! A deep emotional piece.
    There are memories that time does not erase… or we never wanted to let go of those memories…we can never rub away. Forever does not make loss forgettable, only bearable .. no matter how much suffering we went through…
    Regards
    Surabhi

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