Imprints

searching for imprints

that i left

when I was with you

the imprint

that I am now

reconfigured

as is yours

matching imprints

of moments

of memories

like

matching waves in an ocean

from one moment

to the next

we together

the ocean

memories

the waves

7 Responses to “Imprints”

  1. austere says:

    “the imprint

    that I am now

    reconfigured

    as is yours”

    This part is neat, intricate.

  2. Subodh Deshpande says:

    nice poem…
    it shows, how god the almighty(god in the achintya form) and his memories can be compared.
    I do not who is the poet and the poet still requires re-reading of Ramayan the beautilful poem (epic)
    Dasharath could not control separation from lord Ram preferred death while remembering lord Ram;
    what a great bhakta, king and also a father..why we see dasharath as a weak king and father I do not know.. where as lord Ram’s mothers(great mothers..mostly they were female forms of vishnu, brahman and mahesh repectively..) somehow were alive because their son was going to come back and people of ayodhya requested them to be with them..in that separation.

    whatever we see and experience(all sagun forms of lord and alos all lives in this universe) those are waves of this ocean and rest achintya is ocean..what you say…

    Thanks…subodh

  3. kedar says:

    Beautiful…

    record it now…loved earlier two renderings…

    cheers

  4. Janita says:

    Like in Stephanie Meyer´s “Breaking dawn”

  5. Geetha says:

    Beautiful words

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