the mind

the mind asks
and the mind answers
the mind dreams
and the mind doubts

we wait for the dawn
so the battle can begin
once again, thrown
into action

18 Responses to “the mind”

  1. Harb says:

    Reminds me of a shair:

    Aae Galib
    Itni Gehrahion mein na ja

    Aae Galib
    Itni Gehrahion mein na ja

    Aae Galib
    Itnee Gehrahion mein na ja

    Bhootni dia doob jaenga

  2. Kishor Vyas says:

    Superb !

  3. kavitha says:

    dreams and doubts
    like dawn and dusk
    rise and fall
    in mind ensnared

  4. Priti says:

    Mindblowing…….Awakening….!!!!!

  5. Likeness says:

    no one can answer. mind is empty

  6. Amazed with the words that describe the mindset of a mind..! 🙂 I am gonna stick it on my work space and read everyday to keep my mindset in track..!

  7. kay says:

    the mind asks
    and the mind answers
    the mind dreams
    and the mind doubts

    we wait for the dawn
    so the battle can begin
    once again, thrown
    into action

    Dear Shekhar ,
    In reply to you poem:-

    ‘the mind asks which no one can answer but mind…
    it dreams beyond all means…
    and yet,
    it yields all dreams ….
    when “believing” wins “doubts”
    in the same reign of “mind”…

    —Kay

  8. shachi says:

    Following is inspired by your original post so thought you should know it. Thanks.

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  9. shachi says:

    the previous reply was in indic form so putting again in english
    Following is inspired by your original post so thought you should know it. Thanks.

    ek man puche “kuch hai jawaab?”
    dujaa man bole “mein aaphi jawaab!”
    ek man jogi dujaa raajaa
    nindiyaan ke paar manawaa
    phir chede taar
    subah ki raah taake man bairaagi
    ek mushkil chute biti raat
    aur duji dinke saath tayyar!!

  10. Harb says:

    Shekhar, what your mind has to say about Aarushi-Hemraj Murder case? Will you or anybody else here answer the question I have raised at my site? I am perplexed and would be happy to note if anybody else also thinks on the lines I do. Or enlightens me about something else I do not know.

  11. Neeta says:

    all the battles of the mind are in the end
    only to be true to oneself..

  12. Anushka says:

    Sir, you have great mind.

  13. gina says:

    these battles are so difficult at times…but having faith and being positive almost always helps even though it takes a lot of strength at times…

  14. Shekhar ji really so real and great words!!!

    Kya baat hai !

  15. austere says:

    off topic:

    http://wordswithoutborders.org/current-issue/

    March issue on films. You may like this.

  16. ishita says:

    beautiful string of sentiments, sir
    @harb : doobne mein hee to maza hai! hum to gehraaiyaan aazmane aaye hain! 🙂

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